|Hi. The following is a scene from a military thriller I'm writing. This particular one describes a feint assault by three PLAAF squadrons on India's North East region - intended to intimidate the Indians, and as a response to a series of terror attacks which the Chinese tie down to Indian governmental agencies.
I have a bunch of ex military friends on other forums (Indian and Chinese) helping me out with the technical aspects, but I'd like any pointers from you good people on how to improve the vermilisitude or realism of the narration - in particular to the communications and protocols. I'm not so keen on making it sound exactly like how the Indians would conduct it, but I'm very interested in making this sound real.
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Thanks in advance for any tips!